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Crystal Bone (KKG)

on Thu Oct 05, 2017 7:22 pm
Clan's Name: Tsaki

Biography: Mei's mother had crystal KKG. Mei's father was part of the Kaguya, bone clan. Mei was born with a mixture of both. She now has crystal bones!

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Skills/Kekkei Genkai

Name: Kesshou Kokkaku (Crystal Bones)

Type: Element Control and Body Mutation

Stages: 1

Effects: Blood-line unlocks special jutsu as a Kekkai Genkai in the form of Bone Release and Crystal Release.

Jutsus it Unlocks:
Crystal Techs:

Name: Crimson Fruit
Rank: C Rank
Range: 5M
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: Creates a dome of crystal to surround a target the crystals grow out of the ground as the KKG manipulates minerals. It is highly durable from both external and internal attacks, and can be used to either protect or trap a target. It has a diameter of 5 meters that closes from bottom to top.

Name: Crystal Encampment Wall
Rank: S Rank
Range: 15M Height. 10M Width.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 35CP with a 15CP upkeep
Description: Sends out a wave of chakra, which then turns into an almost impenetrable crystal wall 15M in height and 10M in width, given the fact that it repairs itself when damaged which costs 15CP upkeep.

Name: Crystal Imprisonment Wave
Rank: B Rank
Range: 20M
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 10CP
Description: Can encase a swarm of opponents in crystal through a wave of chakra sent out by the user's hand, this crystal forms in the air. However, the wave can only extend up to 20M out from the palm and is shot in a straight flat line.

Name: Crystal Lance
Rank: A Rank
Range: 2M Length
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 20CP
Description: Creates a large and sharp spear-like crystal surrounding the forearm extending 2M in length, which can be use to impale the target.

Name: Crystal Needles
Rank: B Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 10CP
Description: Creates 15 long, sharp crystals per post that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds with pinpoint accuracy. Could also create 30 smaller crystals to trap the target.

Name: Hexagonal Shuriken: Wind Dance
Rank: B Rank
Range: 20M
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 10CP
Description: The user creates crystal shuriken the size of normal shuriken in the shape of snowflakes to launch at the target. The user can choose to remotely spin these shuriken in order to increase its lethal power up to 20M away. The user can also choose to turn the shuriken into multiple crystal shards to surprise attack the target.

Name: Giant Hexagonal Shiriken
Rank: D Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 3CP
Description: Creates a giant crystal shuriken, resembling a snowflake, and throws it at the enemy. 

Name: The Gods' Crossings Technique
Rank: C Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: Places hand on a surface, creating a long stream of sharp crystals to bind and pierce a target.

Name: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Rank: A Rank at 1 Dragon. S Rank at up to 3 Dragons.
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: A Rank 20CP. S Rank 35CP.
Description: The user crystallises a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once.

Name: Jade Crystal Wall
Rank: A Rank
Range: 30M
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 20CP
Description: This technique allows the user to encase a large area in crystal in a dome, thus encasing everything within it.

Name: Crystal Mirror
Rank: D Rank
Range: Near Self
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 3CP
Description: The user creates a large mirror in the shape of a snowflake, which can then be used like a normal mirror. It's just a mirror.

Name: Crystal Blade
Rank: C Rank
Range: Self. 12 inch Length.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: With this technique, the user can quickly form a blade made of crystal on her arm, and use it in a manner reminiscent of a tantō. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.

Name: Crystal Thorns
Rank: A Rank
Range: 20M
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 20CP with 10CP upkeep.
Description: The user creates growing thorn-like crystals that can be manipulated to continuously grow towards the target's direction.

Bone Techs:

Name: Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Willows]
Rank: C Rank
Range: 12 Inch Length
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: Yanagi no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by a Tsaki to take advantage of his bloodline ability. Utilizing their ability to manipulate bone structure, the user grows and extends a forearm bone through the palm of their hand. The spike is then thrust at the target while the user spins around in their dance.

Name: Tsubaki no Mai [Dance of the Camellia]
Rank: C Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: Using their ability to manipulate bone structure, the user removes a long bone in the form of a sword from their shoulder. Because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, but moving so quickly that they seem out of control, the user will slash at anyone nearby.

Name: Hiiragi no Mai [Dance of the Holly]
Rank: B-S
Range:
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 10CP with an upkeep of 4CP up to 35CP with an upkeep of 10CP
Description: The user will twist and weave the composition of a bone sword so that all but the held area spin like a drill.

Name: Teshi Sendan [Ten Finger Drilling Bullets]
Rank: C Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: The user fires the distal phalange bones, or the bones at the tips of their fingers, like bullets. They move at a speed of 3M per second. As the bones fly through the air, they begin to rotate which allows them to drill into their target once they make contact.

Name: Bone Bomb
Rank: S Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 35CP
Description: This is simply put, a round ball of bone is released into the area and it explodes with 200 needles.

Name: Asami no Mai [Dance of the Beautiful Linen]
Rank: D Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 3CP
Description: The user will swing upward with a sword made of their bones, and upon contact with something, sprout their bones from their back in order to create additional force. This burst of force typically throws opponents high into the air.

Name: Karamatsu no Mai [Dance of the Larch]
Rank: A Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 20CP with 10CP Upkeep
Description: The user begins by extending multiple bones from their body, if they have curse seal they activate the first stage before doing this for maximum effect. The bones that extend during this technique are the rib cage, radius, and ulna. They can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes and an offensive weapon that can easily impale an opponent. Upkeep cost is 10CP and initial cost is A Rank.

Name: Bone Cage Snare
Rank: D Rank
Range: Self
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 3CP
Description: Using the rib cage of the person it wraps around their target. The person can either pull them back or just crush them. Target has to be at least in a 5 foot radius.

Name: Susuki no Mai [Dance of the Bell Tree]
Rank: C Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP
Description: The user will swiftly and rapidly stab at an opponent while holding a weapon or having bones sprout from their palms

Name: Katamaru [Harden]
Rank: C-A Rank
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Crystal Bone
Clan: Tsaki
Cost: 5CP with a 2CP upkeep up to 20CP with a 6CP upkeep
Description: The user will condense and solidify their bones resulting in much more dense attack results. It should be noted that this can be applied to any bone that was once within the user's body
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Re: Crystal Bone (KKG)

on Thu Oct 05, 2017 8:36 pm
[Crystal Techs]

• Crimson Fruit
I'd like some sort of dimensions on the dome. How large is it, and how do you center it on someone other than yourself?

• Crystal Encampment Wall
I'd like some sort of dimensions on the wall. How large is it, and how fast does it repair?

• Crystal Imprisonment Wave
I'd like a clear way that this works in regards to being able to counter it. Also, please no Crystal Burials.

• Crystal Lance
How large is the spear?

• Crystal Needles
I'd prefer a cap on how many you can fire off in a single use.

• Hexagonal Shuriken: Wind Dance
I'd prefer a cap on how many you can create at once, and a limit on how far you can manipulate them for.

• Giant Hexagonal Shuriken
This is okay!

• The Gods' Crossing Technique
This is okay!

• Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
A-Rank at One dragon, S-Rank at up to 3 Dragons.

• Jade Crystal Wall
I don't like the concept of crystallizing an entire area. A stronger version of the dome is okay, but not just... the whole area is now a crystal.

• Crystal Mirror
Provided this doesn't have any direct combat application, like reflecting jutsu or manipulating it from range, and it's literally just a mirror, this can be D-Rank.

• Crystal Blade
Size? At least length, please.

• Crystal Thorns
Cap on range and I think it's okay.


[Bone Techs]

• Yanagi no Mai
This seems fine, but how far can it stretch out?

• Tsubaki no Mai
This seems fine

• Hiiragi no Mai
I guess this is okay..

• Teshi Sendan
How do you regenerate them? How fast do they move?

• Bone Bomb
How large? How many needles? How much would it hurt to get hit by this at point-blank range?

• Asami no Mai
This is okay.

• Karamatsu no Mai
This will need an upkeep cost and an initial cost, and will be A-Rank.

• Bone Cage Snare
Provided you don't intend to just nom someone's body, this is fine.

• Susuki no Mai
Just a single quick attack? This seems okay.

• Katamaru
Initial and Upkeep required, but it's fine I suppose.


I would like a second look, mostly becasue the systems aren't quite set in stone yet, so I didn't give much of these ranks or costs or anything, but at least I looked at it for ya! ♥️

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