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Crystal Bone (KKG) Empty Crystal Bone (KKG)

Thu Oct 05, 2017 7:22 pm
Clan's Name: Tsaki

Biography: Mei's mother had crystal KKG. Mei's father was part of the Kaguya, bone clan. Mei was born with a mixture of both. She now has crystal bones!

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Skills/Kekkei Genkai

Name: Kesshou Kokkaku (Crystal Bones)

Type: Element Control and Body Mutation

Stages: 1

Effects: Blood-line unlocks special jutsu as a Kekkai Genkai in the form of Bone Release and Crystal Release.

Jutsus it Unlocks:
Crystal Techs:

Bone Techs:
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Crystal Bone (KKG) Empty Re: Crystal Bone (KKG)

Thu Oct 05, 2017 8:36 pm
[Crystal Techs]

• Crimson Fruit
I'd like some sort of dimensions on the dome. How large is it, and how do you center it on someone other than yourself?

• Crystal Encampment Wall
I'd like some sort of dimensions on the wall. How large is it, and how fast does it repair?

• Crystal Imprisonment Wave
I'd like a clear way that this works in regards to being able to counter it. Also, please no Crystal Burials.

• Crystal Lance
How large is the spear?

• Crystal Needles
I'd prefer a cap on how many you can fire off in a single use.

• Hexagonal Shuriken: Wind Dance
I'd prefer a cap on how many you can create at once, and a limit on how far you can manipulate them for.

• Giant Hexagonal Shuriken
This is okay!

• The Gods' Crossing Technique
This is okay!

• Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
A-Rank at One dragon, S-Rank at up to 3 Dragons.

• Jade Crystal Wall
I don't like the concept of crystallizing an entire area. A stronger version of the dome is okay, but not just... the whole area is now a crystal.

• Crystal Mirror
Provided this doesn't have any direct combat application, like reflecting jutsu or manipulating it from range, and it's literally just a mirror, this can be D-Rank.

• Crystal Blade
Size? At least length, please.

• Crystal Thorns
Cap on range and I think it's okay.


[Bone Techs]

• Yanagi no Mai
This seems fine, but how far can it stretch out?

• Tsubaki no Mai
This seems fine

• Hiiragi no Mai
I guess this is okay..

• Teshi Sendan
How do you regenerate them? How fast do they move?

• Bone Bomb
How large? How many needles? How much would it hurt to get hit by this at point-blank range?

• Asami no Mai
This is okay.

• Karamatsu no Mai
This will need an upkeep cost and an initial cost, and will be A-Rank.

• Bone Cage Snare
Provided you don't intend to just nom someone's body, this is fine.

• Susuki no Mai
Just a single quick attack? This seems okay.

• Katamaru
Initial and Upkeep required, but it's fine I suppose.


I would like a second look, mostly becasue the systems aren't quite set in stone yet, so I didn't give much of these ranks or costs or anything, but at least I looked at it for ya! ♥️
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